(CREDITS):
--written by thewriter197
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--employed by lonewolf from deviantart
--story directed by lonewolf
--landscape details directed by thewriter197
--I also added additional things to the original outline given for the story
Traveling to Another Planet
The
year is 6086. Jon, a salesman in the two door spaceship business, takes
a trip to the planet Jargas. Jon came from the planet Jupiter. Business
in Jupiter was good, but his life has been empty. Hailey broke his
heart, and Jon has not been able to get over it. She was human and quite
pretty for blonde. For the past couple months, Jon has been going to
the Finzoin Bar trying to wash her out of his mind. His heart still
loves her, but its time for Jon to move on. Unable to come up with a
reason to do this, a friend at the bar advised Jon to move to Jargas.
The women there are more focused on sex and not careers like the women
on Jupiter. Jon has been trying to spend some time with his
ex-girlfriend, but she was always working. One day, she told him he wasn’t
good enough for her anymore. With nothing to look forward to in
Jupiter, Jon set out to another planet to find new life. Maybe he would
find a woman who accept what he wanted in his life.
Jon
aboards Red Eye 2020 space ship. A space ship capable for seating 5,000
people. Jon looked at the black and orange space ship. He tried to
remember the last time he left Jupiter. Never, Jon scratched his head
and walked up the steps. The seats were orange and the hallway was lit
with blue lights. There was a empty room on the left side of the space
ship. The room contained a window with a view of space, a laptop, and a
bed. Jon moved to the location. Punched the dial board on the machine to
pay the bill. Orange and pink lights lit up. The screen turned on and
said “name.” Job replied with “Jon.” The machine then acknowledge his name and gave him access.
Bags
of Jon’s luggage fell to the center of the room. The view of space came
into view. Other space ships prepared to take off from the Jupiter
Space Station in the outer ring of Jupiter. All the ships had different
colors. Mostly bright to be seen by other space crafts in the event of
an emergency.
Jon’s
eyes closed and he lean back in the orange chair. Trying to relax the
mind. Preparing for journey to a world he never been. “Sir, welcome to
Red Eye, do you need assistance with anything, Need water or food?” said
flight attendant. “I need some apple juice. That’s all I need right
now.” said Jon. “Ok, I will get some for you soon. Wait one minute.”
“Wait,” said Jon. “Yes??” said flight attendant. “How long is the trip
going to take?” said Jon. “Not too long sir, our gethro thrusters can by
pass any vacum in space with the new 66x ginie engine installed. The
ship will get there in about 5 Jupiter hours.” “Great, uh, thanks,” said
Jon. “Not a problem sir, you free to ask as many questions as you
like.” Said Flight attendant.
The
flight attendant walks way. She passes by other passengers and
continues to meet and greet. Jon looks at her. He notices her slim
physical appearance and her small company badge attached to her space
ship suit. She was very small and the outside breast guard gear was also
small. She wasn’t quite wearing a outside spaceship suit. It was a very
smooth black leather material with pads on the elbows and knees for
protection. Her body would blink in orange from the Red Eye symbol on
her chest. Her boots were the typical rubber black space boots all space
attendants in the year 6086 wear. They wear them so they can easily put
on a outside space suit in case of a space ship breach.
Hours
go by on the space ship, Jon gets up and look at the window. The space
ships has been traveling for a few hours at light speed. High range of
purple light leave the outside thrusters. The ship passed a few habital
planets and moons. Some planets John remembers from high school, but
there were some he never seen before. Such as the snow planet Hijao. The
planet where it snows all year. Jon kept looking through the window.
Being amazed at how many interesting space objects his eyes could
capture. There was a war happening on some planet that he could see from
miles away. There was a moon being worked on by a group of white aliens
with long blue hair.
He
saw more and more strange things, then his two brown eyes became weary.
Jon has not slept in awhile. Air was breathing in Jon’s nostrils. The
air froze his lungs and tried to make him more tired then usual. It must
be a safety measure to keep humans sleep when traveling at light speed
on a space ship. Jon grabbed a sheet to snuggle up with. The warmth was
starting to come in.
Jon
looked at the other passengers to pass time. A women and a child was
seen standing at the slot machine. The child was crying. “Mommy, why
can’t go to the playground?” said Timmy. “You can’t go because you been
doing bad in school. Everytime you do bad.” Said Mom. “Waaaahaaaaahh, no
mommy no, I won’t do bad next time. Noooo. Please let me go the play
ground.” said Timmy. “No, you been doing bad too many time, shut your
mouth or I’m going to slap you. Do you want me to slap you.” “Noooo, I
just………..” said TImmy.
Another
woman was seen walking in the hallway. She was carrying a laptop and
wearing light blue goggles. Her hair was blue and cut down to her
shoulders. The black lipstick on her face indicated she was part of the
cyberpunk movement on Jupiter. “Hey, you like the view?” said Jon. The
woman put goggles up and turned. “The view, um, no, it looks like every
space window I look at.” Steps come closer to Jon and Jon knew she
wanted to talk more. Her butt twisted in black cargo pants with black
boots. A blue cut off shirt fitted on top of her double B breasts. The
woman sat down in a chair opposite from Jon.
“So………….what brings you here.”
“I am looking for a new beginning. Jupiter doesn’t make me happy anymore.”
“Well, its better to look for something.”
“My name is Jon, what is…………”
“I’m not gonna tell you. I am always traveling from planet to planet.”
“There is no reason for us to know each other by names. My job makes me travel a lot. Let’s just do a little chat about space.”
“Ok, that is……good enough. I could spare time.”
“The people who built landmarks in space, what do you think they were looking for. Besides resources.”
“They were looking for answers maybe the truth.”
“The truth, that is what a man from Jupiter thinks. Just like the men from Earth.”
“No, they were looking for the same thing we are all looking for.”
“What you mean………….”
“They
were looking for something that would make their life seem less shitty
or look for something that would make their lives complete.”
“Now that something can be anything right. It could be resources but is it really.”
“Hmmmmmm……..I can’t think of a response to that.”
“Hahahaha, you do better on your thinking outside the box.”
“Why you leaving Jupiter again?”
”To start a new life.”
“A new life…………..hahahahahhahahah”
“Why are you going to Jargas.”
“That is for me to know and me only. I have some business that one client gave me strict orders to not talk about.”
“What’s your job?”
“Since we probably won’t meet each other again, I will tell you.”
“My job is to find information and use it to the best financial ability possible.”
“Can you be more specific?”
“Afraid not, my job is not suited for something you talk about at the local coffee shop.”
“Hey, its nice talking to you. Its time for me to go, we almost there.”
“The name?”
“You don’t need to know remember. ”
Jon
watches the cyberpunk girl walk back to her station. Hair low cut blue
hair reminds him of Hailey’s hair back in college. “If only she would
give me a chance. Those cyberpunk women always want you to jump through
high steps.” said Jon in his mind. Jon noticed the ship entering the
atmosphere from the window view. Fire surrounded the whole craft. It
flared with daylight sky trying to destroy the space ship. Luckily, the
force field attached was strong enough to protect the craft from high
atmospheric pressure. “Attention, all space ship attendants, we arrived
at Jargas. Please grab your luggage and be prepared to leave.” said
space ship pilot.
The
man gathered his things. He put everything he took out of the bag back
into the bag. Jon didn’t bring much stuff with him. He only brought a 14
days worth of clothes, business laptop, and wallet. Jon was planing on
buying whatever else he needed once he got to the planet. This was a new
beginning to him. He wanted everything to be new and he wanted his life
to finally be filed with sunny days. It was time to put his
ex-girlfriend in the past.
Two
green doors slide open. Pink stairs lead downward. Jon stepped onto a
pink sidewalk with dark red words going back and forth. “Never seen that
before.” said Jon. He looks up and to the side. Jon couldn’t believe
how different the world was. It was different in color and different in
building design. The buildings would all float in the air with the aid
of a giant green force field. There were sections where one could look
outside the force field. The city was not quite on the ground. It was
miles above a purple ocean.The ocean was traveling to a bottomless
gorge. Earthly science could not explain the scientific forces at work
on planet Jargas. Most building were light colored grey with a random
tinted window color. Most building were made with a octagon shape. There
was a few in typical square shape, but most were in a three dimensional
octagon. Some were glued together by multiple octagons stacked on top
of each other. A tunnel would connect the building layers. There tunnels
everywhere with windows. The tunnels would move you from point A to
point B. The sky was colored in red. A faded bright red that looked like
the Sun was always setting here. No clouds were present.
Jon
reached into his pocket. Pulled out a small cubed device. “GPS to my
new condo at Jargas.” whispered Jon. A big yellow screen pops up. It
shows Jon the location of his new condo and the path to follow to get
there. Jon walks on the sidewalk. People walk past Jon. Most of them are
Anthropomorphic humanoids.
A species that is part bat and part human. The species were born on
planet Roji and made a pact with humans in the year 4554. Planet Roji no
longer exist due to the Sun’s self destruct mechanism.
The
Anthromophic species, commonly known as Anthros, have the ability to
mate with humans. They also share a common ancestor with the humans.
Anthros with military or mercenary careers wear a full plate of silver
armor. The Anthros have wings attached their backs. The wings give them
the ability to fly. Most of them prefer walking during the day. A tail
is often found on the back of a Anthros, but some have had their tails
cut off. The Anthros often build societies in high places or in air
locations. The civilization has been around for over 2 billion years.
Jargas would be their 3rd home
planet. The species like flying around and prefer using their own wings
to aerial technology. The species come in many colors. The body shapes
are generally the same except for the face. Each Anthros face has a
unique feature. When you see someone flying a ship on planet Jargas, it
is probably a species not of Anthros.
Jon
see many Anthros species walking past him. Some are old and some are
young. Their clothes seem to be more barbaric then the clothes being
used on Jupiter. The women Anthros hardly have any clothes on them. A
piece of fabric covers the but area. A horizontal strap covers the
breast area. There were some women wearing full plated armor. Jon
noticed a pretty pink Anthros creature. He looked at her for 30 minutes.
He wants to say something to her, but he chose not to.
Jon was running late to his condo meeting. He was suppose to at the land lord’s
office at 5pm. It was now 6:25pm. Jon asked the yellow screen for the
time. It gave him 6:32pm. Jon started to walk faster. He didn’t to make a bad impression. Running with all haste. He stepped to the land lord’s office with a gasp. “aaahhhh, ahhhhh, hi my name is Jon. I’m here for my condo,” said Jon. “Hii, come this way Mr. Jon,” said female Anthros at the counter.
Jon
told the clerk all his information. He gave her his birth certificate
and showed her a copy of his space ship selling license. The clerk
approved his paper work and handed Jon a key. Jon looked at the key and
left to see his room.
The
path to get to the condo was hectic. There was so many stairs and
octagon shapes. The place was too big for Jon to find on his own. Then,
the pink female Anthros girl showed up again. “You seem like you don’t know your way here,” said female Anthors. “No, I just got here, umm, can you help find the number on this key,” said Jon. “No, I can’t sorry,” said female Anthros. “Uhhhh, what, you can’t………..I just……..” said Jon. “hahahahahah, the look on your face. I was joking. Let me take a look at it,” said female Anthros.
While the pedestrian was looking at Jon’s
key, Jon noticed the size of her breast. The breast were so out in the
open. There was not covered like the beach women on Jupiter. They were
covered by a very small black horizontal line. The line only covered
what appeared to be her breast nipples. The skin was faded in pink. It
was bright and yet alluring to the eye. A smell was around her. It
smelled nice and Jon wanted to know what it could be.
The
pink Anthros lead Jon to the right condo room. Jon did not say anything
as they walked up the stairs and down the halls. He would wait for her
to turn in a direction where she couldn’t see him look, so he could look at the full texture of her body. Jon wanted to be discreet about it. He didn’t know if she had a big boyfriend or if she was violent to perverts. “What is that smell,” said Jon. “The newest rasi perfume. Its the best perfume on this planet. I think.” said pink Anthros.
“It smells really good and you lookk…….friendly,” said Jon.
“I am freindly, well sometimes. Hahahahaha,” said pink Anthros.
“I’m Grem,”
“That sounds nice, I am Jon, they call me Jon, ummm thanks for”
“For helping you and making sure your not lost. The first time can be something you might fear. But, then what is there to dear.”
“Yes, I was thinking the thing…………”
“hmmmmmmmmm……………………….”
“Alright, I have to get to my work and stuff in the condo to settle.”
“Alright, I guess this is goodbye. Maybe I will see you again.”
“.…………..alright………”
Grem walks away and waves. Jon gets a tingle in his stomach. “Did I fall for a half human bat. Man, I really need some sex.” said
Jon in his mind. Jon has not had sex for two years. It has been long
enough for Jon to not have sex. He needed some bad. The sex was the only
thing that calmed him down when he got scared or lost confidence in
what he was doing.
Jon
entered the place and put the things in order. The condo had two baths,
one large window, one small window, one bed, and two empty rooms for
guests. The walls were black with black smoke moving in the shadows. You
could see shadows of different objects if you were to look at them for a
period. The tile of the floor was always moving in water. Jon’s
hand touched the floor. It felt like concrete, but the paint looked
like he was standing on a purple ocean. Jon felt around for a switch.
The switch seem to turn the special affects of the wall off only. The
visual effects of the place were more advance then the affects of
Jupiter. Lights were red or light blue depending on the preference of
the user.
Jon
sat in a couch in the living room. Popped open a bottle of Jargas
champagne. The glowy purple liquid seeped into this throat. He felt cold
and sweet fruit on his taste buds. “Ahh, not tainted,” said Jon. Jon looked at the ceiling and saw the same black smoke moving on the walls. Eyelids started to close. “Ahh this is really nice,” said Jon. Jon passed out 23 minutes later.
“Hi, Hi, please wake up. Jon, Jon?” said female Anthros. “Yeah, I was sleeping, Uhh, hi,” Said Jon. “You are being assigned a maid while you stay at Hectoid’s
condos. All members of this condo complex receive one maid. The maid
will help you with any activities you may need. Please ask her to do
anything. I need to return to my quarters now. You two have fun, I mean,
you two be civil.” said female Anthros clerk. She walked out the room and locked the front door.
“I need to get my sleep now.” said Jon. “Don’t worry sleepy, I won’t give you more headaches, heheheheh” said Grem. “Grem, your my maid, why , I mean its nice to meet you.” said Jon. “We met yesterday, you should say its nice to see you.” said Grem. “Are you………no, no, um, can you clean everything that needs to be cleaned and then come back tomorrow?” said Jon. “Yes, I can do that sargent. I will follow your every command. No matter how stupid it is.” said Grem. “Would you really follow my stupid commands?” said Jon. “hheheheheh, you don’t have ask that. I was just saying and stuff.” said Grem.
Days
went by, Jon went through the same routines. Get up, call people he had
to call for work purposes and go back to sleep. Make some space ship
sales. Pay the bills month to month. Talk to Grem and tell her to clean
the mess he made. The same thing occurred over and over. Days turned
into weeks. Jon was getting repetitive and no matter what he tried to do
to get rid of his loneliness. There it was staring at him in the
mirror. After awhile, Jon was starting to get depressed. Drinking more
alcohol then the usual. Watching T.V. later then normal. The heart was
longing for something. He couldn’t
quite think of what it was. But, his heart was longing for some type of
love to keep him whole or to keep him as strong as he needed to be.
Nights
Later, he started drinking heavily. Sometimes, he would talk to his
clients in a drunk tone. The clients would get pissed off and cause Jon a
decrease in business. Jon knew he had a alcohol problem, but he couldn’t
afford to wake up with the thoughts in his mind. Haunting him, frowning
him, and trying to convince him. The thoughts that echoed in his head
before he went to sleep. The demons that made the situation worse. The
alcohol was the only thing that could get rid of the thoughts. The only
thing that could make him happy again.
8
months later, Jon started masturbating again. This time with the pink
Andros in mind. He had been thinking about her for some time now. Each
night, he would think of what she would feel like. He called her a she
in his dreams, but a part of him felt it was an it. Jerking the cock
multiple times in day, the depression started to go away. But, it
somehow came back to him. He tried to get rid of it in many ways and he
tried to fight it in as many ways as he could. But, the heart was lonely
and Jon need some sex. There was nothing that could replace it. There
was only the sex for the sex desire.
“Why hasn’t he asked me for sex. I been nice to him. I always try to cheer him up.” Grem
thought to her self. Grem moved her boobs around in the blue mirror.
She freshened up to go to Jon at the condo. Grem put a pound of make up
on her face and smeared black lipstick on her lips. Her eye lashes were
brushed with deep blue paint. The Anthros was preparing for a one night
stand. The Anthros knew Jon was single and knew Jon was depressed. She
would always see bear bottles smashed on the floor. She would also see
Jon gulping down a beer each night to get rid of his negative thoughts.
She decided that today would be the day she would try to do anything to
get Jon to ask for sex.
Jon
looked in the mirror and cried. He drunk some alcohol and went to sleep
in a tub. When he woke up, he immediately went to touching his dick. He
needed a little push before going back to deal with that one annoying
client. He climaxed and felt a sigh of relief. “Yes, yes……………just what…………….” said Jon. “I see you having fun in here. Are you ok Jon?” said Grem. “You can’t see me like this. Go away.” said Jon.
“Its ok, I know how you might feel.”
“You don’t, alright, you don’t, just leave me be right now.”
“Its ok, I can help you with your loneliness.”
“I’m not lonely, I just feel asleep….I…….”
“No, your not, your not ok, let me come here.”
“uhhhhh……..”
“Shhh,…..I won’t hurt you. I just want to help you Jon.”
“You can’t help me Grem, just go away and let me be.”
“Noooo, look at you….I can’t just leave you here. I know you feel alone and I feel alone too.”
“Uhhhh, I want you to touch me. Please.”
“You don’t have to say please. I been waiting for you to say since the first met.”
“Thanks.”
“Don’t say thanks so soon. Let me help you first and then say thanks.”
Grem
takes off her clothes. She removes the small fabric from her legs.
Then, she pulls the strap lock on her very small shirt. Boobs pop out
slowly. Nipples are shown. They look similar to the nipples of a human
girl. Her nipples were darker at the center. The rest of her body glowed
in faded pink. The back of her wings stretched out and then came
tightly together. Her body flexed and stretched. She didn’t want to hurt herself while she was having sex with Jon. Blue hair waved back with tiny pink fingers. Neck rotated in a roll. “I hope your ready for me Jon. I’m ready for you. I am ready for you Jon.” said Grem.
She
does a 360 for Jon. Jon locks on her butt. He sees the cheeks spread
open by her two pretty pink hands. His mouth opens slightly. Thinking of
what she feel like on his mouth. Grem grabs her breasts and tries to
look innocent. Twitching her eyes and lifting her boobs. Legs stride
forward. A pink hand grabs Jon. Jon stands up and follow.
Grem
brings Jon into the bedroom. The bedroom had a green window with a blue
mattress in the center of the room. Then, she locks the door. “Come here. Come.” said Grem. “Yeah, I’m coming to you,” said Jon. Jon wraps his arms around her waist. Grem raises his hands to the breasts. “Hmmmmm, I want you to put it in. Go ahead, you can touch me,” said Grem. “Uuggh”,” replied Jon. Grem’s wings spread outward to give Jon a easier access to the crouch.
Jon
smells her blue hair. Nostrils breathe in slowly. Grem smiles in
response. Her hair smells like some fruit recently picked from Jargas
tree. Jon holds his cock for two seconds. Grem moves his hand out the
way and feels on it. Her slightly fuzzy skin touch the 10 inch dick. She
jerks it really fast. All five fingers pulls and tighten. The dick
lines up. A little comes out. Then, the cock moves. It angles to the
right to go to Grem’s
asshole. Grem really wants it to go there. She could take in the vagina,
but she decided to give Jon something extra for this moment. She wanted
to this moment to be extra special. The first time they layed with each
other.
Grem let out some air. “Ahhh, ooohhh, come closer Jon, closer. Please.” said
Grem. Jon moved closer and brushed his chest against the back wings.
The wings were very soft. Not as hard as Jon thought earlier. He stroked
forward. Moving his legs to touch Grem’s.
On and on, Jon pushed through. He wanted to feel good and it has been
awhile. He tried going slow at first, but the inside was so good, and it
been so long. He had to go faster. He had to come real fast in there.
The inside of Grem’s
asshole was amazing. She could tighten her asshole as much as Jon
wanted. The whole tunnel felt like it was getting wetter. There some
kind of blue guop leaking form it. Jon was not sure what it was. It felt
good to him and it made him feel a more relaxing sex. The goup felt so
good on his dick. Jon never felt this when he was having sex with a
human woman. This new feeling was something else.
There was even some type of snake thing wrapping around his cock. It was massaging his cock while he pushed in. “I never felt this before Grem. I want to say…. that I am sorry I didn’t ask you sooner. Grem…I,” said Jon. “Don’t say anything right now, just go with it. Ok.” replied
Grem. Jon went faster and breathed harder. He tried to keep his
composer and keep quiet. But, he was enjoying himself rather well. He
decided fuck it. She would just have to make fun of him later.
“Yes, I want you now baby, please don’t leave me, please don’t leave me,” Jon said in excitement. “I won’t alright, keep going.” Grem
whispered. Jon went really fast in strokes, then he came. The white
milk ejected in her butt. Jon pulled out. The milk leaked from her butt.
The drops started to hit the ground.
Jon could smell the sex tastes. It wasn’t
quite human, but it was something that caused his eyes to widen and
glide. She pushed him on the bed. Then she moved her mouth on his dick. A
tongue whipped out. A 6 inch tongue that wrapped around Jon’s cock. The vibrations erupted in Jon’s mind. He could not believe how good it felt. It was so small yet so tight. Grem’s
tongue went up and down. As it traveled, she slick it in circles to get
a razor cut effect. Jon felt every cut and imagined he was floating in
the air.
Grem
then moved her entire mouth on his cock. Her mouth went really fast.
Faster then a human woman could possibly do. Her nose breathe out air.
She went deeper and put the cock in the back of her throat. The whole
dick was in. Teeth bit down on the dick and made Jon yelp. Her teeth
felt so good. She slowed down after Jon came two times in her mouth.
Her mouth filled up with white milk, moved in a sexy position. Jon looked at her face and froze. Grem’s
eyes turned to purple light. She glowed brightly in the darkness. She
opened it and nothing but milk came out of it. Her hands then moved
closer to Jon’s face. Butt moved to his exhausted dick. She gripped on the cock once more and made it rise.
“I want you inside, Jon, I want you inside.” said Grem. Cock jammed in Grem’s asshole once more. Butt cheeks spread outward. Then, they tightened and closed together. Jon felt the clench. “Ugghhgm, ahhh, yes,” said Jon.
Grem rocked Jon’s
spirit. The bed moved. She went up and around. Riding the dick slow
then riding the dick fast. Her wings expanded and stood still. Her butt
moved downward. Butt was now touching the length of Jon’s cock. Butt rubbed on Jon’s
legs repeatedly. Jon screamed and screamed. Grem was making him feel
the happiest he ever felt in a long time. Jon felt more happiness. She
could see it in his eyes.
After 35 minutes, she came on Jon. Blue goup erupted everywhere. Her back shaked and legs crunched awkardly. “Hahahahahahhaha, fuck.” said Grem. “Are you ok. You ok Jon.” said Grem. “Yeah, ahahhaha haaaa haaaaa, aahhhhh, yeah, I’m ok.” said Jon. Grem got up and stood up in the room. Jon laid there in the bed and lit a cigarette.
“Let’s watch a movie,” said Jon. “What you want……..ahhhahah, ahhh, to watch. What?” said Grem. “Let’s watch Night Light. I’m afraid to watch it by myself.” said Jon. “Your afraid of scary movies, this must be a good one. Let me put in. Wait there.” said Grim.
Grim
walks nudly to the DVD station. Looks for the movie and then put it in.
Grem returns to the bed. Jon wraps up with Grem and whispers, “I want you to stay here, Can you do that?” said Jon. “No, but, since you asked so nicely, I can stay here if you want me too.” said Grem. “Ok, I will help you move in tomorrow.” said Jon. “Ok, that sounds sweet. Let move your dick a little more.” said Grem.
Jon
and Grem move in together. Overtime, Jon forgets about his ex and the
depression goes away. Maybe Jon found the thing that makes him complete.
It wasn’t his job. It was Grem. If he ever saw that cyberpunk girl again, he would have something interesting to tell her.